Comments : The Clock Swallows Me

  • 15 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    'Envy has wrapped itself around me
    And isn't letting go.' That is some awesome writing there and my favorite part of the poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Reminds me of yesterday. I went through my poems and read them all, and realized that some were written for different ones. And one was written for the girl I thought was the one. well, we broke up a year later, and damn, that sucked. It put this kind of darkness in me for her, even though we broke up as friends.
    Well, this poem was a 5/5 poem.
    Aaron