Comments : To Strew Words In A Garden Bed

  • 15 years ago

    by Sweetdream

    This was just lovely. Beautiful flow, wonderful purpose and my favorite kind of imagination! Thank you for that.

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    "A posy of words" - Perfect!

    Though your writing is always oh so much more than that. Excellent work Melissa

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Wow from the title this is not what I was expecting, but it is an absolutely fabulous piece of work, I'm envious lol Very beautiful and well written, flowed nicely, great job!

  • 15 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Wow, Melissa!!! This is an amazing write!
    I love the imagination and life you put into this.
    I absolutely adore the phrase "posy of words". So enchanting.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 15 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    What an absolutely BEAUTIFUL poem! The rhythm it held was wonderful, and the imagination & ideas were just breathtaking. The second stanza was my favorite:
    "For those
    who grab ahold
    with thick roots
    and impregnable purpose"
    `impregnable purpose -- that phrase is SO powerful, I can't even get over it.

    What a great job you've done here.
    There's not much else to say except
    congrats for the win, it's well deserved.

    Keep writing
    down the bones,
    `Nova

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    This is an excellent write. The words and thoughts original and express the meaning of your words very well. I am adding the poem and you to my favorties so I can enjoy both again and again. Very well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Nobody

    Wow i love your analige its very original and very creative 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrtas on the weekly win :)
    Take care
    Cindy

  • 15 years ago

    by Lyn

    Lovely, lovely poem, says such a lot so descriptively and succinctly. I was almost floating away whilst reading it.

  • 15 years ago

    by ether

    Amazing, honestly.

    The only thing it needs is punctuation :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashley

    That was really great.