Comments : Heart Braking

  • 15 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Sorry for not returning the deal offer sooner i was busy^^. A nice and short poem not much else to say

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    What I noticed about the title was that 'braking' should be 'breaking' and the same as the poem. But, when I read it over the second time I realized that the whole 'braking' went with it. considering that braking is like stopping. The lines that particularly made me think that were these -

    "Tears of crystal
    Falling to the ground
    Crashing, fracturing"

    As you fall you're [at some point] going to stop, along with the fact that it's crashing and fracturing. I guess, I'm rambling about this because it's the only thing to mention about the poem. Considering that the poem is well written, has great flow... which is so easy with small poems, but there was something about THIS poem that made me like it. Emotion is what's hard to get in the small poems, but you did a wonderful job with that. I honestly think it's one of my favorites by you.