Wow this was sad n sweet. very nice flow. i love it. u got talent use it. n i'll keep on reading on. Keep it up?

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy

Aww thats so sad!!! but super sweet. love it. your really good.

100/10

Awww, that was really cute. I love how you talk about your grandmother as an angel, its really thoughtful. Ill be looking around at your others, keep up the good work. ^^
*Chaotic Angel*

Beautiful!