Wow this poem is incredible... simply amazing, ryme and flow was nice, ending it with such a good question.

5/5

You'll never know what was the poem about after you've finished it, nice one you got there! This kind of style keeps people continue on reading the poem!

This poem is so excellent! I really felt it. keep it up!

Me and my boo dis is so d way i feel excellent5/5

Aww I love the emotion in this poem! I think you described the hearts of a fair few people; even my own. The flow was a little jerking at times when some lines could be shortened, which made it a little hard to keep up with, however. But then again, shortening could ruin the message you weaved into the words. So if you were able to shorten the longer lines and keep the meaning, you would have quite the lovely poem here!

And as a small note, they say that if you can't get someone off your mind, then maybe they're supposed to be there ^_-

Overall, I quite enjoyed this poem. Keep it up~! 4/5

--Hari

I don't think it was all that unique, and the uniqueness is what I like in a poem. It just seems like another love poem that everyone writes. The flow was okay but not great. I didn't seem to stay on track when I was reading it, and I didn't quite understand it at first. I had to re-read it for it to actually click in.

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