Ok umm, what is this poem about? The word choice was good. You might try making the poems longer or something it is short but if you have the right words in that will help the reader understand what you are saying then you wont have to make it longer. I gave it a 4/5.

15th visitor! and this i think would be more considered a quote in my opinion, but i see you do like writting short poems to just get your feelings down? thats my guess but another hard to understand poem and a lil TO short, to short to really comment much on, except the last line,

Now stars align in graylight.

Your life gets better whilist memories remnance around you. Love that line but still a 4.

This is actually one of the best poems I have ever read. I don't know why people are confused it by. I absolutely loved it. All the imagery struck me so well...I loved the metaphors. 5/5.