Who care if my heart gets torn apart
Grammer = who cares

Of coarse you wont know how I feel
Grammer = Of course

This is a really good poem with deep feelings. i like the line ... Im just like a bird that is never going to find his perfect dove, this is a good comparison to show how you feel. but although thats how you feel. it will change.

strong poem, really well worded and you know how to keep the pace going. well done xx