Comments : Beginning of immortality(Collab with Nema)

  • 11 years ago

    by SashaMirage

    Wow that was amazing! You two did a great job together! And I could not even tell that it came from two people...it really flowed well. And the way that you did it by using titles from your other poems was very clever. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Heba

    Oh wow,what an amazing poem.It was really wonderful. I don't know what to say,but all of your poems express the feelings that are buried inside me with your breath-taking poems you show them to people.

    More than excellent sis...5\5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Faithless

    Wow i must say that i'm really impressed with this collab. The flow was excellent ...i couldn't really tell whose lines are whose...Both ur words and her words just melts into one and the choice of words that u guys used really brought the poem to the edge.

    Excellent job
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    The flow was awsome. this poem took me to the edge then stopped befor going over. it was a rush with words! lol. 5/5