Oh!! wow! this poem was fantastic. firstly i think the way you have worded that with the layout works super with the poem. having each statement set out on a new line really makes it more powerful and gives it a stronger impact!

i love the ending, the only thing left being the mirror! that ends so strongly and leaves you with that very very powerful image of the mirror.

well done on this, thought it was excellent..well done xx 5/5

Im speechless! amazing work! 5/5

NEVER GOOD CAUSE UR NOT FEELIN DAT WAY

BY DA WY I LIKED IT .....,

That is one strong poem

THAT IS ONE HELLA STRONG POEM LOVE IT...GREAT JOB

Extremely amazing write 10/5