AWESOME concept! And so nicely written... it flowed so smoothly.

Great Poem!

This poem litereally sent shivers down me several times. I love it. Amazing work. Although your lines are sort the words flow and it is almost rhythmical perfection. Keep writing, love it. ~ Rose

a decidely sad poem with a great ending, keep up the good work I enjoy reading your works thanks for sharing Harry Bryant

I am going to read all of your poems Holly, I wanted to start at the beginning to see where you started from, this is a great first poem, I loved it. Tim

Beautiful poem, I give it a 5.

wow you write so well? Are these true stories?

areider@pbp.com

Wow! That was absolutely amazing!!!! It nearly brought me to tears. You are such a talented writer:) 5/5

WOOOOOOOOOOOOO That was excellent (lol) It really was. I got an impression from the first stanze that was erased at the end. I could envision all the actions of what was goping and in the end I found myself happy for both for the people in the poem, even though they don't exist. This is a 5/5! I also have poems of my own and I would greatly aprecaite it if you rated mine and commented on mine as well. Thanx, and keep up the great work!

-Frank

I had to hold my breath throughout in anticipation of the ending . It made me realize that when we sometimes think that love had diminished and there is no hope (when we are ready to throw it over the edge) that it is truly really still there but has just been blanketed for so long that we have forgotten about it .But when push comes to shove we are awakened by our true feelings and not willing to throw it all away .
This poems originality will make it unforgetable !!!

I like this poem very meaningful. Keep up the good work.

Awe, oh my God, Holly... that made me teary-eyed! What a beautiful piece this is, truly spectacular. It tells a true and vivid story, and I can see it so clearly in my mind's eye. You did a beautiful, beautiful job... I'm awe-struck. Did this ever win? I would imagine it did, it's so good! 5/5

Bri~