Comments : My Pain is Real

  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is a good short poem, well flowing and easy to read.
    well done x

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this. I can relate to what your saying. The way you wrote this was very easy to read and understand. Nice work hun. Shanik

  • 14 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    I like this. I can relate to what your saying. The way you wrote this was very easy to read and understand. Nice work hun. Shanik