So Amazing..
So great..
So breathtaking!
Just like always, u blow me away with ur amazing way of writing!

Keep it up Sara xx

I think you did an amazing job for this...Ur expression for this dark theme was well penned.

Excellent job

When i read i read a poem that is good ,i know the kind and where it comes from, this work is great, keep it up.

When i read i read a poem that is good ,i know the kind and where it comes from, this work is great, keep it up.

Oh that was goood !!
I love dark poems, they're the only poems that get through me to an extent I cannot comprehend!
First of all, I love the rhyme scheme..it was kinda random but entertaining =)
the darkness of the poem is..well-penned.
I loved the second part most
very good write indeed..

Write on
I think I'm gonna keep reading your poems :)