This s a great piece ingrid , i enjoyed it , btu in term of structure ,

i am not a huge fan of the free style ,

and i dont like 1 block poem , it is always better for the reader eye , to not see 1 block of lines to read , soo in my opignion split them into stanzas ,
and for the rhyming i love a rhyming poem, it is always the ebst tio remmber in yoru head adn touch you and intensify the meaning !!!

i hoped that one have this feature !!^__^
other thant that , it si great !!

Awww great poem and love the tone...truly a love story and romance...

I really liked your poem. I'm really in to free hand because it never seems forced and it is what I do most often. The wording was truly great. It is about something in life that I'm sure most everyone looks for at one point or another. I gave it a 5/5 =)

Good work. If the moon was out tonight, I might just have to outside with my better half and dance. You have made it so romantic with your words.

Ingrid,

What a gorgeous image. I can clearly see the scene, it is clear and crisp. The moon is full and its light illuminates the world. The street is bare and quiet, not even a gust of wind to move the scene....then you enter the scene, a park perhaps, maybe even a lamppost? You are wearing a flared dress, white, which appears to glow in the moonlight. You wait and smile knowing that your love will soon join you, meet with you. He will stride towards you and sweep you into an embrace and then your night dancing will commence. Swirling around and around in each others arms, in each others eyes and wrapped in each others hearts.

Well done Ingrid on this beautiful write.

Michael

This is very sweet(:
i am getting a very beautiful image, you have written a great poem.

-Tiana