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  • 15 years ago

    by Simply Josh

    Nice man. I like the mix of sophistication with the metaphors along with common phrases to relate to readers. Good job

    cheers, josh

  • 15 years ago

    by xXxRaulXxx

    Very good. Like Josh I like the metaphors

    Hey check my poem Tears of True Love

    Uve checked 1 of my otha poems This life

    this poem is probably my best