I liked this poem. It makes a good story. The wording was great. I gave it 5/5. I see nothing wrong with anything in this poem.

This poem has a wonderful twist...
both darkness and love fitting together...
i find it really sweet...
the poem is marvellous...especially the ending...
yet, one of the first stanzas got me... :)

"A gentle touch, a soft caress
A smile a wink and a kiss
The kiss of death
For once its lips touch yours you're gone"

I find this stanza so amazing :)

really nice job
*isabel*

5/5