CJ,

In our club you are always the joker and sometimes it's hard to figure out what you are saying, lol.
But in your poems I always see the real you.
I love the honesty and the strong voice you have here. Only the strongest of people dare to show their weakness.

Much love,

5/5 Ingrid

A great write!

these lines were probably my favorite.

"I am tired of looking in the mirror and see the lonely me
I need someone to hold me, someone here I could see"

nice job, 5/5

Loverboy,

Doors closing, a great metaphor for regection. An inspiring write too.

Well done.

Michael

The meaning behind your words is filled with so much power! I could just feel the emotions you were expressing because you brought it to life for me with your language. I think you did a great job with the quote I provided and constructed the poem in a way that left me speechless. Thank you for writing this beautiful piece.

Well done.

*5/5*

Nice!