Comments : Some One Else

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenie

    :( sis this is so sad
    r u feeling low again? i hope things get better for u
    always know i am here

  • 10 years ago

    by Torn

    Really strong poem. Just felt so much despair and almost carelessness in that one.
    3rd line.. "My eyes has changed their color" *have?

    I'm glad you're still writing and I hope this is just a venting thing and that you're ok.
    Miss you darling.
    xx

  • 10 years ago

    by Torn

    Really strong poem. Just felt so much despair and almost carelessness in that one.
    3rd line.. "My eyes has changed their color" *have?

    I'm glad you're still writing and I hope this is just a venting thing and that you're ok.
    Miss you darling.
    xx