This is a sad and touching write, yet very well written. Sometimes there are so many rejections and one feel lost as if the world turn it's back against him, yet keep the faith, believe that you're just in a tunnel and soon you'll see the light. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel.

Even when everything seems set
I would at some words here .
Even when everything seems to be set . It flows a little better .

This is not the ending I've strived
This is not the ending for which I've strived .

The flow seems kindof off in the first stanza , and I'm really not a fan of the last line of it . I gave you a suggestion to kind of fix it up . Otherwise , the flow is pretty good , and I like your rhyme scheme , but i think it would be better if you made the first stanza rhyme the same way as the rest . 4/5

Well written. Somehow dark and sad. Gripping write. Enjoyed it!

The departure shattered before me
Despair once again whisperers in my ear
Feelings of agony, raging, let me see
The end arrives, and it is so near

*This was my favorite part. The way you write is so captivating. I love your style and the way you rhyme is flawless. I thought you expressed yourself very well here. I enjoyed this very much. Keep it up. Nik*