Comments : Remeber

  • 13 years ago

    by Teria

    "Was covered wiyh "I love yous""
    [Was covered WITH "I love YOU'S"]

    Other than that one small thing you have an amazing poem here. I really enjoyed the read. I don't know about the whole hoping nothing is written like this again. I get not wanting to feel the emotion but this is a great poem and you did so well writing it. I thought it was great.

  • 13 years ago

    by kate

    Wow, this was really emotional but I honestly thought before I read about your boyfriend calling you up the next day saying sorry I was ready to cry but I saw that, and im glad he said he was sorry, im glad you guys are doing better, and hopefully there will not be a poem written again like this but this poem was very good though.

    keep it up.
    keep on writing.
    love always and forever.

  • 13 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Good poem.

    my favorite stanza would have to be the last one, because its so true.

    good job, i look forward to reading more(:

  • 13 years ago

    by Nate the philosopher

    What a very well written poem
    i liked it

    5/5
    -NTP