"Was covered wiyh "I love yous""
[Was covered WITH "I love YOU'S"]
Other than that one small thing you have an amazing poem here. I really enjoyed the read. I don't know about the whole hoping nothing is written like this again. I get not wanting to feel the emotion but this is a great poem and you did so well writing it. I thought it was great.
Wow, this was really emotional but I honestly thought before I read about your boyfriend calling you up the next day saying sorry I was ready to cry but I saw that, and im glad he said he was sorry, im glad you guys are doing better, and hopefully there will not be a poem written again like this but this poem was very good though.
keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.