"Was covered wiyh "I love yous""
[Was covered WITH "I love YOU'S"]

Other than that one small thing you have an amazing poem here. I really enjoyed the read. I don't know about the whole hoping nothing is written like this again. I get not wanting to feel the emotion but this is a great poem and you did so well writing it. I thought it was great.

Wow, this was really emotional but I honestly thought before I read about your boyfriend calling you up the next day saying sorry I was ready to cry but I saw that, and im glad he said he was sorry, im glad you guys are doing better, and hopefully there will not be a poem written again like this but this poem was very good though.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Good poem.

my favorite stanza would have to be the last one, because its so true.

good job, i look forward to reading more(:

What a very well written poem
i liked it

5/5
-NTP