This is absolutely beautiful. You expresses love feelings in a unique way. It merits 5/5 Keep it up, kel.

This was beautiful. amazingly written. full of emotion, powerful, sincere, deep. well done.
--lovedroughtmelody

Wow. you are right when you describe yourself, you really are good at writing love poems. Again, this is gorgeous.
i love the concept of the two sunsets, and im glad that you explained that in your last stanza as i was a bit puzzled when i read it in the first. Very unique.. awesome.
5/5