Breanne....You're gonna start outwriting me pretty soon. -.-' lol. really, this one's really, really good. it's very visual and extremely metaphorical, which i adore.

Old playthings look out from the closet
Their glass hearts shattered on the floor
Glancing back you turn and laugh
Just break her a little more

^^ That beith my favourite stanza. It's just...i'm already crying, but it made me cry harder. It feels like we all get shoved on the shelf every once in a while...I'm sorry, Breanne. Good poems mean crappy nights. *hugs you tight* gorgeous write..

5/5