Well this poem was different. I liked it. The wording and flow was great. I gave this poem a 5/5. =)

Oh this was so nice. It reminds me of the poem with the same title that TJBecker wrote. How in tune you two are^_^
I loved the form and the whole magic of the poem.

Well done Sasha this was a well thought out poem and well written, I know the form and you did a first class job .
Well done

Grant

I loved the imagery here! I could just imagine it all flawlessly in my head which made it that much more interesting to read. Great choice of words and you used this form beautifully. The flow was great and there isnt anything left to say but that I loved it.

Well done.

*5/5* :]

Ohh this poem is absolutely beautiful... the choice of words that you used strongly portrays what you had in mind.I love it;)