"your just a pretty face."
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Wow this poem was very well written. You portrayed the sad feeling well, and used the title very well. I was extremely impressed with the flow of this piece, hte rhyme was consistant and everything else just flowed so nicely together as one. There was one point where I kinda had to stop a little.. I think it was because you should have had a comma instead of a period... but I'm glad you used puncuation it helped the flow as well.. and its something that every poem should have.

5/5

No comment, cuz silence is sometimes more meaningful! 5/5

Amazing, i enjoy this poem. It is filled with meaning. I like the flow, also it is well written. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel.

This poem has so much feeling. It felt that i was the one who was being left by, in your words, a pirate. Even though i am a guy.....
it was just amazing