Beautiful Silvia,

I know what it is about and indeed it is so hard...I know exactly how it feels *hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia,

Another new form to me and one I would like to try.

I like the poem, about the loss of love. It is both sad and thought provoking.
I can imagine coming up with a line that can be repeated in the last line of a stanza and have it rhymed with is a challenge, but that is part of the joy of poetry, writing about life and making it sound effortless, despite allthe restrictions placed upon the form.

Well done

Michael