Wow! Why no one has commented on this excellent piece I have no clue. The emotion is so strong, the imagery and descriptions are wonderful. There is a magnificent flow, that goes hand in hand with your strong word choice. This piece has a perfect length for what you have to say. It starts off kind of vague, but then it starts to explain and it is wonderful. You have penned one of the best pieces I have read, ever. Definatly a 5/5 from me, and totally going on my favorites list. Though, I am amazed that you can write so well for your age. (I don't mean that to be rude, I promise you.) Can I give this a 100/5? Please?