Awww... i love it. amazing job as per usual.5/5. great job. i really liked this one. ~KM~

Aww that's cute.... :]

5/5

Awesome job once again! Just be careful about your spelling:

So I'll take a bow.
Because you(r) close to me

=) But I'm picky! Hehe, nah I just want to make sure your poetry shines bright! Take care kiddo!! 5/5

First stanza: always = it's always
Cos = Cause

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You wrote this quite well. I think that the rhyme scheme took away from what you could have put into this poem. And, a few of the rhymes seemed a bit forced - but overall you did a good job writing this.

I love this poem. I think the rhyme scheme was a little overwhelming, but other than that I really liked this. I like how the person is in love but is willing to settle for just a friendship so the love won't be ruined.

"I know you're my friend,
But I'm just playing pretend.
I want to be more,
And it's becoming a sore,
For I know this down to my core."
I love this stanza!! It has so many different emotions. Love, yet sadness that you are just friends right now. You can really feel the pain inside. by "For I know this down to my core." I think those words are very powerful and effective.

I think this is a really great poem, and it's sweet. I like how the person compromises for just friends even though they are aching inside for this love. It shows real courage and a lot of self-lessness. (I think thats the word lol) It is really great!!! 5/5 Great job