Comments : Crayons

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    You're my box of crayons
    you color my world from black 'n white.
    you light up my day,
    & shine through my night.
    ^^ so many people have told me take the & out of the poems and write and instead idk why but they say it ALOT

    just like a rainbow
    streaking through the sky
    a mesmerizing masterpiece,
    don't ever say good bye.
    ^^cute image there!

    you're my box of crayons
    you high-light my life.
    so ever luminescent,
    you're sharper than a knife.
    ^^so innocent and sweet : )

    you're sweeter than some sprinkles
    coating a vanilla cone.
    softer than the cotton clouds,
    onto you I've grown.
    ^^i love cheesy : ) it makes me smile everyone needs a little in their life honestly people ! : )

    you're my box of crayons
    the paper i must be,
    cause baby we go together,
    better than pb and jelly.
    ^^ahaha that was great

    great poem! 5/5