Execllent poem.Even though its questions its like really good :]

Why , is a very powerful word, it determine a lot of unclear things to us , and you pinned a ery important part in love, where you want to hate someone and you jsut can not because you love him ,

till you dotn know anymore if you love him or hate him .

i loved thsi poem but i would recomend and you split it in ztanza and not leave it as 1 block it si ebtter for the eye^_______^

great work girl , keep it up
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