Comments : My perfect love

  • 16 years ago

    by ShyandHurt

    I think this poem is simply stunning. The word choice and the sentence structure fits all so well. Amazing, sounds like it is written from the heart. Good job.

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    What a sweet poem. :) The flow and the writing is beautiful.
    "You've shattered the walls I've hid behind
    You've shown light to a man that was blind"

    My favorite line of yours.
    5/5