Aww.. sad. bery sad. the image sleep on the bed without the one u love. remembering her right there byurside. and with one blink she's gone. but the memories are stil there floating in ur mind never lettign them go. they bring smiles, laugh n tears. a lovely poem you wrote here truly. i love it. keep it up!! 5/5
A nice story well formatted. I would add punctuation. Remember that rhythm/metre is what changes a group of words from prose to poetry. Poetry does not need rhyme but it demands rhythm/metre and I think this is a bit lacking here.