!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow! Very, very well written! You go through free verse /and/ paragraph poetry, and it's beautiful and full of sensory things--cigarettes, all those colors, wetness, well done!
The key line gives me trouble, well I should say gave, because the last line clears it right up.
Lounges= lungs :P
Beautiful, my favorites lines are after "I think I like you..."
Amazing!