"All I ask is to carry this last message
To all the beloved people in my life
Kisses is what you shall find in this page
And a bid to avoid conflict and strife."

Reading this poem, tears comes from my eyes when i remember those women and children who'd lost their husband and father in the war. Yes life is beautiful, yet it's a risk but watching those men leave their families to serve their countries or for an obligations, i could put myself at these women place. Knowing that each time their husband left, they're worried and hoping he'll return safe.
A very good thought my friend, keep it up, kel.

This poem is beautiful, I see no things that need changing:)
It was a very emotional write and I am sure that people who have to do with this on a personal level will have trouble with their eyesight (tears)
Beautiful, my friend:)

Hugs,

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