Wow I really liked that! I never actually thought about life in the sense of a carpet but now that I think about it, it really does make a lot of sense. I really loved the entire metaphor, great work 5/5!

Very nice. Excellent message with few words. 5/5

Though it's very short ... your words had a long meaning that made me want some more... Great poem 5/5

Ingrid im speechless with your beautiful metaphor...ur little words speaks a thousand words

great job
5/5 from me

Well, A wise man once told me "A stupid question is a question unasked", so my question is what does you poem mean? It really looks impressive, however I am sure it would be even more impressive to me if I understood what it refers to :))... Many Thanks

This is so beautiful ... such an optimistic view of life ...

Looking back one day
your carpet will be perfect
each thread in it's place

^^it leaves you with a feel-good feeling :) beeming with positive attitude...

wonderful write...