Comments : You die.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    She falls
    and she breaks
    its her tears, you awaite
    and she cries
    and she screams
    and she dies as she bleeds
    This is beautiful . I love it . Seriously , keep it up . Another 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by CountlessMoments

    Keep it up, this is a beautiful poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by Marie

    Wow, gave me chills! Loved it, your writing is amazing too!! 5/5 no doubt about it

  • 14 years ago

    by Fiend in the Iron Maiden

    I think that was really good ._. actually. Great job and keep up the amazing work!