Comments : Thursday 4th December.

  • 11 years ago

    by The Prince

    Clear from reading you work, you have a strong way with words. Your language is pretty tamed yet quite complex. I haven't got time to do a proper comment but I loved your wording in this piece. Just thought I'd let you know I'll be looking forward to reading some more material from you.
    This is quite a subjective poem, and I liked how the form complimented the tone you used.

    Great work!


  • 11 years ago

    by Starlight

    Flow is fabulous, *sigh*, im speechless.

    "the shapes
    do not repeat, and the
    sheet is left bare. Fast, yellow
    movements and the
    winter twigs are weak."

    Great, great great, much better 5/5. :]

  • 6 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    I can see you put thought into this good job 5\5