That was very beautiful, and I think a lot of people could relate to it. The flow was steady and the emotion was very well balanced.

This phrase here:
"Just like an lost boy should"
- Should be:
- Just like a lost boy should

I know it's just a little thing, but it's the only needed correction in the poem, so well done. 5/5!

-mandy :)

I'm definitely already a fan of your poetry style and skills. Perfect rhythm, perfect rhyme. You stick to a line of thinking and don't stray off in all directions. You voice whats in your heart, which is what makes a great poet today.