Aww beautiful poem sweetie, but sad.

the light shines now :]

5/5

I truly believe the light will soon shine your day and night. The greatest thing is line, and as they say" As long as there is life, there's hope", so you patience will not be in vain. Sad indeed but still there's hope. I enjoy your poems. It merits 5/5, keep it up kel.

That was really realistic & descriptive.i could jus picture it in my mind the whole time.i always love when poems have questions!
very beautifully written!
lexie =]