Comments : Shes mine now (body parts)

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Lol I liked this MUCHO!

  • 15 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    WoW! i really like this. say a lot of things to me. like you care whatz underneath her skin.
    this is my favorite part i don't know why. it just is.

    whats this
    her true place
    it not in her face, or chin... its
    under her skin...

    Great job here. Please do Keep it up! i'll be reading on.

    TaKe CaRe,
    Frenchy

  • 14 years ago

    by ForsakenBeautyXx

    Wow, this was a very unique poem. I've never read anything like this. I really liked it. Its a bit dark sided, but that's the point. You really got to where you were going.

    5/5

    ashley