Comments : Thoughts

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    There are so many exciting things to do to get over emotionally stress. Love can save anyone. Again remember we're living in a world filled with obstacles yet we can be happy. In stead of staying home with negitive thoughts in the mind, call a friend, do some sport, or even do some discussion on the net, this can have some healing effects on the mind. This merits 4.2/5, keep on writing, kel.

  • I like this one nice work

  • 15 years ago

    by Chocolate Addict

    I can feel the anger, lost and confuse that busted from you.Pouring out the thoughts that lingers in your mind. Well I've also read some of your other works and im really surprise that you like to cut yourself (cause you seem like a cheerful girl in your pic) but i guess everyone has got a secret. I think it would be great if you were to seek a councellor it would hurt that much. Sharing your worries with someone will actually help you better. You could also PM me if you want. But back to the poem, I think you have done a great job