Comments : Wakeful

  • 15 years ago

    by StarGirl

    I loved this. :) My fav part was

    "My head bobs back and forth slowly,
    falling in each direction in turn, then realigning itself
    It's like I'm nodding because I understand something that I didn't before,
    syncing to some previously unfathomable rhythm,
    One that I really still don't understand"

    I could just picture that, litterally. It painted a very vivid picture.