Comments : The Icon

  • 15 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This poem is pretty sweet :D It's got a very light, but somehow nervous feeling.
    fifth stanza 'turns' instead of 'turn'
    sixth: 'seems' instead of 'seem' silly English things, still good though :D
    'your imaginary yet naked body' sounds kind of funny to me, I can't place what though.
    This would make a great song :D

    'lord, let me give you a piece of advice:

    if you try to convince me you exist,
    this is not the way to go.'

    I absolutely LOVE this line, being the philosopher that I am :D

    I love the first set of them to, I think those ones are the best.
    The ending deserves the title, and I lvoes this :D