What a sad little poem. You said so much in so little words. Excellent write

A few lines, yet means so much. I am sure it won't be for long you have the presence of that special. You are a great poet and i admire your writing. Keep it up, kel.

I miss you
My heart grows heavy<<great wording there so many people will be able to know how that feels!
Feelings fade<<an all time true
All turns black<<been there : /
You are my sun and my moon<<ahh..very great symbolism!
I love you so much

Great poem!! you are so talented to be able to write poems like that ! 5/5

Hmm, interesting poetry form.

It was short, but it worked. I liked the sun and moon part a lot along with the feelings fade. I love using fade in a poem, it's such good imagery. Well, since it's so short I'm not sure what all to say about it other than good job and I have nothing to critique! Tee hee. XD Five out of five.