It's so nice to see you in the poem:)
Always dare and show your inner most feelings, because those are the poems that touch others the most, sweetheart:)

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

All I have to say is Wow!

What a lovely poem. Yet sad. I loved the form you used and you have penned it perfectly in the few word choices .

You had so many emotions put into a few little phrases i loved it. great job.