Comments : Hear ye! hear ye!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    A beautiful poem Crystal.
    You used exactly the right words to portray our friend Michael and his Lucas:)
    Michael is indeed a gentleman like no other and very dedicated to his son.
    An excellent poem for an excellent writer and friend:)


    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    A fitting tribute. Excellent. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Congratulation Mr darcy !!

    and what an wonderful gesture you did crystal and the poem loks very much perfectly done !!

    great poem , adn perfectly done!^_^

  • 12 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    Hey Crystal this is such a super sweet poem like only you can do it, Michael must be so pleased over this.
    You did an excellent job well done 5/5


  • 12 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    ...I am lost for words, I mean really I am!

    Crystal, thank you so much for this wonderful dedication. While I was reading it I was thinking, hey this dude is one hell of a dad to have Crystal writing about him, I wonder if she'll say who it is...well, as I said, I'm speechless.
    I have just returned from the hospital with him. Everyone there is so proud of him as he is doing so very well. They have said that he can reduce the nights where he has to have intraveinous feed. He has had a growth spurt and as getting stronger by the day.
    So you can imaging how I reacted when I read this, It sent shivers through me and I thank you from the bottom of my heart.


    Michael *still sniffing*

  • 12 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Very well done! This was very sweet of you to do for Darcy :] Darcy is a very sweet father who only deserves the best for him and his son.

    What a thoughtful write Crystal.
    Well done sweetie!

  • 12 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow Crystal this was beautiful and very deserving for a kind soul like Darcy. It was a very sweet gesture on your part and if everyone was as caring as you then this world would be a better place.

    "Holding his hand yet letting him run"
    ^I loved this line!

    Well done.
    *5/5* :]

  • 12 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Awww. That's beautiful. :D I love Mr. Darcy. <3<3<3 ^_^ He's kick ass.

    The only thing I have to say is work on punctuation a little more. Only small mistakes, other than that I loved it. The rhyming was brilliant and I love how you made it a royalty thing. It made it unique seeing how you could have done the simple thing and went with modern times and using actual names. But that is very cool. Loved it. Five out of five. :]

  • 12 years ago

    by noha

    Its realy great poem and it deserve to be in contest,i love ur simple words ,the feeling deep inside,you got my vote ,keep in ur good work