Comments : Daddy here's too you

  • 15 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Daddy please come back
    There not your family I am
    I still remember everything
    but that was when you gave a damn
    ^^how can father abandon something that is his?! a question so many people never get answered...

    I just saw you yesterday
    You seemed so happy with your new family
    You didn't even acknowledge i was there
    I'm miserable can't you even see
    ^^my best friends dad got remarried and had four kids with his new wife he dis owned her and only talks to her when he needs a baby sitter i can see how it effects her and im sorry this is happening to you..

    You have a new daughter now
    I'm your daughter too pay attention
    I came to see you not to watch you love them
    I'm filling with so much tension
    ^^: / so sad...

    Please daddy you know how much i cry
    they don't love you I do i love you
    I don't get any sleep at all
    I try and try but there's nothing I can do
    ^^ sometimes you can only worry about the things you have control over otherwise you willl drive yourself insane

    You don't even know details of my life
    You don't know my hobbies or favorite sports
    At least talk to me a little bit
    Give me a little support
    ^^a cry for help..so innocent

    You made a mistake leaving this family
    And still you can't realize it
    I'm suffering from your mistake
    you want to come back just finally admit
    ^^they won't they have an ego : /

    You know how much I hear about fathers
    Everyone ask me what you do for me
    You know what I say to them
    My father doesn't love me can't you see
    ^^that is so sad i hate the imperfections of this world honestly

    I was once your little girl
    But only for a few years
    Than you left us with sorrow
    And me with a few tears
    ^^love the understatement in the last line here! it adds a lot

    I'm tired of you picking us up
    And than ignoring me when I'm there
    I'm your creation too
    Just stop please pretending you care
    ^^take out the please in the last line...other than that beautiful last stanza it summed up the poem!
    5/5 i am sorry you have to go through this : /

  • 15 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Very sad poem full of emotion. This kind of thing happens way to often. I gave this poem a 5/5.