Azzza,

I like this a lot.
A few remarks: beings ( add an s); still need healing ( loose the s) and these affections instead of this.
You are doing well, really well:)

Hugs, my friend

5/5 Ingrid

This was very touching and wonderful. I loved the emotion in it. You've done a great job.

That was very beautiful and full of emotion. Every word has alot of meaning... 5/5