What a sad poem...but beautiful not the less. i loved it. i added you to my favs. i really enjoy reading your stuff. Shanik

Wow-nice twist at the end.

um i dont know what others would say but it was very blunt and confronting the way you expressed it so easily. but thats got nothing to do with your writing, just a personal opinion and very well the response you were seeking =P

great job

5/5

aish
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