Comments : Primal Beat

  • 15 years ago

    by Trying to hold on

    I adore the rhythm this piece holds, penned to a blissful flow of sincerity, I believe these words are felt within ones heart, hold onto it. Love and lust is what we live off, that makes it all worth it. Awesome conclusion in the last stanza wrapped up superbly. Adored piece, gifted.