Very nice. Begins with sadness then turns to joy. Good job.

I must say that for a 11 year old you got pretty good view of life.
You picture it in a little words, but you didn't miss a thing.
great work.I admire it.
5/5
Carla

Life is surely a learning experience which is worth experiencing so it is right to view life as a never-ending ray of sun. Nice poem.

Love it! Perfectly worded