I like how you wrote this from somebody elses point of view..you put a lot of emotion and thought into it god job

Azza i think you'd found lots of inspirations these days. Your poems really touches me. I enjoy reading them more and more. It merits 5/5, keep it up, kel.

Overall a great poem.. of moving on.. when you werent ready to move on.
A few little things:
Where were you when I needed you
you weren't there to came for my rescue

^^ you weren't there to come to my rescue

Do you know how long I've waited for you?
and what you have put me through?
knowing that 'us' wouldn't come true
I had to find a substitute
^^ my favourite stanza.. wow.. awesome work

Every time I kiss your substitute
I close my eyes and wished it was you
^^
I close my eyes and wish it was you

but i got to wake up to reality
You didn't seem to be coming for me

^^ but i have to wake up to reality

Very nice poem :)

W O W... this poem must be sung because it's amazing... suitable words in a suitable place...
I really enjoyd reading it although it's painful and sad, but the way you expressed the situation was deeply and perfectly amazing...
Keep It Up 5/5